I hate the really nitpicky "ohh, they used an extra comma!" poking, but I also really hate it when I'm trying to read and I can't figure out what's going on amidst the tense changes, misspellings, and complete lack of punctuation.

I do weary of the constant Judgy McJudgerson crap fandom so delights in, though. No, you are not really a better person just because I write about raping and eviscerating fictional puppies and you think that's gross (and can get twenty of your friends to say how gross and wrong and disturbed I clearly must be).